Tuesday 21 April 2020
How to brush your teeth the right way 😃
In room 1 W.A.L.T write instructions and today I wrote how to brush your teeth the right way,
I hope you enjoy and please make sure to leave a comment to help improve my work. :)))))
what toothpaste do you use?
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Nice Job Kata! This blog post is nicely set out and easy to read, Keep it up
ReplyDeleteThank you liv, you keep it you to you are doing an amazing job with your posts!
DeleteHi Kata, great job on the instructions. I like the use of all the adverbs. As it was titled 'How to brush your Teeth' perhaps you could of added more about the actual brushing.
ReplyDeleteIn my house we use Colgate toothpaste.
Hi Mrs Rooney,
Deletethank you fro the advice and in my house we use Colgate toothpaste too!
Fantastic job Kata, I love how you have added your infographic to your slideshow. Well done on using adverbs and imperative verbs as well as adding some time connectives. I agree with Mrs Rooney, how could you be more specific with your instructions when brushing your actual teeth, think about the little children that need more help. Are they to brush behind their teeth, the front of the teeth etc.
ReplyDeleteThank you Miss Holland!
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