The girls all got ready, they all helped each other out by curling each other's hair or by doing each other's makeup. They were so excited because they heard that senior prom was supposed to be one of the best nights of their lives! Around 4:30pm the girls had finished getting ready which was perfect because they were getting picked up at 4:45pm by their dates Jayden, Thomas and Olly.
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