Then it clicked about ten minutes later Tayla had come up with an idea. She grabbed a
bobby pin out of Tiffany's hair and jabbed it into the car door where the dress was. Then
she managed to wiggle the bobby pin and while that was happening Tiffany was pulling
her dress out gently and then it finally popped out. Tiffany praised her like a God, she
was so grateful. Then they limousine left and they headed on into prom. The happy couples
danced the night away and...
bobby pin out of Tiffany's hair and jabbed it into the car door where the dress was. Then
she managed to wiggle the bobby pin and while that was happening Tiffany was pulling
her dress out gently and then it finally popped out. Tiffany praised her like a God, she
was so grateful. Then they limousine left and they headed on into prom. The happy couples
danced the night away and...
Here is another snippet of my narrative that I have been working on. I hope you like it and
make sure to leave a comment to help improve my work. :))))
make sure to leave a comment to help improve my work. :))))
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